My Blog Comment - SLJ (Positive, Thoughtful and Helpful)

 

Here is my first task for SLJ program , this task was about quality blog comments. 

The reason I chose this blog post was to give Jaymalyn a really helpful and positive comment which Jaymalyn would use to help improve a lot in . I told Jaymalyn to ask family members and friends to read her work to check punctuation before publishing because family's and friends do help make a difference ! 

Do you think my comment was Positive, Thoughtful and Helpful? 

keep up the good work everybody!